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My family.

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My family.
 
Hello, I am Evita.
My favorite animals are dogs and cats and birds. I love animals, but I don’t love snakes. My family is good. I love my family. My mum’s name is Dalia and my dad is Arturas and my sister is Emilija.My sister is one year. My dad is thirty-six.

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  • Timothy Ryan
    February 4, 2012 at 10:41 pm

    Hi Evita!Good job! Here are some little corrections:Hello,(In English, only the "Hello" or "Dear blablabla" go on the first line.) I am Evita. My favorite animals are dogs and cats and birds. ( My favorite animals are dogs, cats and birds.) I love animals, but I don’t love snakes. (I love most animals, but not snakes. [snakes are animals too in English]) My family is good. I love my family. My mum’s name is Dalia and my dad is Arturas and my sister is Emilija. (My mum’s name is Dalia and my dad’s is Arturas and my sister’s is Emilija.) My sister is one year. (My sister is one year old.) My dad is thirty-six.

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